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Common Core: ELA
Pre-Class Prep
Teaching “Evidence & Arguments”
02:02
LANCE BALLA: before you teach, um, tell me a little bit about your lesson, kind of your goals and objectives, the standards you’re going to be focusing on. TEXT:
Lance Balla
K-12 ELA Curriculum Developer
Bellevue School District, Wa
02:12 TJ HANIFY: Okay, well we've got two days of lessons here and it's really starting and centering on a reading standard about being able to identify the central idea in a text and not to just be able to do that but to be able to connect specific elements of the text and show how they develop or reveal that main idea. TEXT:
T.J. Hanify
9th and 10th Grade Ela Teacher
International School, Bellevue, WA
TEXT:
Start class with reading standard:
Identify Main Idea
02:40 TJ HANIFY: Um, so what kids will be doing is they've come in having read, um, the text Letter From Birmingham Jail
and they've used one reading strategy altogether called thinking notes, or Metacognitive Markers. So they'll be able to track their r-, their own reactions.
Then we'll do a close reading exercise in class.
I'll have different groups actually doing some differentiated tasks to help them identify some other really important elements of what they see in there. And they'll also be considering what is that central idea. TEXT:
Discuss:
Letter From Birmingham Jail
Use Thinking Notes
Close Reading Exercise
TJ HANIFY: So, they'll sort of come up with an initial draft and as they move through the close reading process they'll be coming up with a continually more refined version of what that central idea is, but have to be able to explain where in the text you see that being developed.
03:04 LANCE BALLA: So tell me a little bit about the challenges you faced in planning a class that would address these … Standards in particular.
TJ HANIFY: Well, I think one thing that's important when planning using the standards is that you can't just look at one set. So you can't just say today I'm going to have some writing standards or some reading standards or some speaking and listening.
TJ HANIFY: So, what you'll see is a strong emphasis especially on the first day on a reading standard that calls on students to identify the central idea but to be able to connect that to specific text elements and understand how those help develop or reveal the central idea. TEXT:
Common Core:
Determine central idea
03:34 TJ HANIFY: Um, you'll also see a lot of work on speaking and listening standards about presentations, about presenting e-, reliable information and factual information, about the way that students should interact during a conversation and about how to follow set protocols …. TEXT:
Common Core:
Speaking and Listening
03:47 And finally we’ll be moving towards an argumentative writing piece to tie into those writing standards and we’ll talk about how to have a central claim and back that up with effective evidence TEXT:
Common Core:
Argumentative Eriting
04:00 LANCE BALLA: Okay, so you’re recognizing that this Letter to a Birmingham, Letter From a Birmingham Jail is a dense text and kids really need to unpack it. They don’t need to gloss over kind of big, large main ideas, but they really want to narrow down kind of in the language in the letter itself.
04:13 TJ HANIFY: Right so you'll see groups present their findings and share them with each other and then actually on day two we'll continue to work our way through the text and we'll do a Socratic Seminar. We'll use, um, a little variation on it called the Fish Bowl with, there's a lot of turn and talk with an inner and outer ring.
TEXT:
Socratic Seminar
04:26 TJ HANIFY: Um, and the kids will have come in creating their own levels of questions. We'll be concentrating on level two, drawing inference from the text and level three, making universal connections.
TJ HANIFY: And so that they'll be a lot of student centered questioning and conversation going on to really help make sure that they've a very strong understanding of the text before they move to a writing process assignment.
04:43 LANCE BALLA: So, on that second day, then, the Socratic Seminar…. what are some of the key elements you’re going to be looking for?
TJ HANIFY: Well in any Socratic Seminar you want to have strong participation from students and that includes strong listening.
04::53 TJ HANIFY: So even though they may not be speaking at this time you want to be able to track and know that they're reacting to something, maybe jotting down some notes, thinking about maybe what they're hearing and how that might help them with the writing task later.
TJ HANIFY: And then, by having this inner and outer circle, we'll have groups of partners all the way through and so we'll continually have these turn and talk moments where they'll be working together as a team to come up with more ideas for what they want to share.
05:21 LANCE BALLA: So tell me how a little bit about the text and how they will use the text during that Socratic Seminar.
05:25 TJ HANIFY: Sure. So, uh, the text is a slightly c-, um, shortened version of King's Letter From Birmingham Jail.
TJ HANIFY: Um, so we worked on some of the context to understand what was going on in the Civil Rights Movement at the time. And they're really going to be looking at how it is just an amazing piece of persuasive writing that doesn't just say I'm right, you're wrong but draws in an outside audience that was refuting a lot of King's ideas.
TJ HANIFY: And so they'll really be looking at the way that he makes a great case for what he's doing. Not just to the eight clergymen that he was directly responding to, but to that full open audience, um, all of us who are continuing to read the letter today.
05:59 LANCE BALLA: So tell me a little bit about the writing they’re going to do. You said it’s argumentative so it fits in that particular, um, set of standards related to argumentative writing, but what specifically are they going to be doing?
06:09 TJ HANIFY: So, they're going to be considering to what extent King's ideas are still relevant today.
TJ HANIFY: And so they'll be encouraged to consider what are certain occasions that are going on in the world and whether that's the Arab Spring or whether that are things that are going on in the United States where people may be breaking laws or feeling that they have the right to break unjust laws.
TJ HANIFY: And so we'll be talking about th-, their own take on that. So, you know, where do you see his writing still being relevant today? And they'll be doing that actually in the form of a blog.
06:38
TJ HANIFY: I think one of the other challenges th-, for me personally was, um, writing standard six really calls on us to step up our game about writing for the twenty-first century. And that means writing on the web, publishing, taking advantage of all the sort of fluid ways that we can publish and react to text on the internet. TEXT:
Challenge:
Common Core and Technology
TJ HANIFY: So they'll be writing a blog entry with their own opinion and then they'll also be required to give some really high quality feedback in the comments section to at least two other editorials.
06:56 LANCE BALLA: So let’s talk a little bit about the outcomes. How are you going to know that the students addressed the standards that they’ve been working on, that they’ve learned them?
07:03 TJ HANIFY: Well, I think minute by minute you're going to see a lot of back and forth conversation that's going to tap into some of that speaking and learning. You're going to see students sharing ideas when working in groups. Maybe in a positive way, even, you know, arguing back and forth a little bit defending their own ideas.
TEXT:
Share Ideas
TJ HANIFY: But they're going to be relying on protocols to get new takes on some of those ideas from other people. It's going to be important that they develop their own ideas through discussion.
07:24 TJ HANIFY: As far as the reading you're going to see them producing a, um, a sort of a one slide PowerPoint … where you're going to see that c-, explicit connection between textual elements and the overall meaning where they're going to be having to really talk about how they were able to make that s-, sort of connection. TEXT:
Produce Powerpoint
07:51 TJ HANIFY: And then in the writing I think that you're going to see, you know, there's a real challenge there when you move to the sort of internet based writing that you still want to keep it high quality writing and that it's not just something that's casual. Challenge:
TEXT:
High-Quality writing
TJ HANIFY: Um, but, m-, what you're going to see is the fact that they took the time to really develop their own ideas on this text over, you know, this long period of time and I think you'll really find that there’ll be a strong sense of not just comprehension but application of that text and new ideas.
08:00 LANCE BALLA: Well, good luck TJ, have a great class.
08:08 TJ HANIFY: Thanks.
82 Comments
Michael Daigre Sep 9, 2023 9:34pm
Mr. Hanify uses several different Common Core standards, including reading, speaking & listening, and writing to plan his class. This allows him to meet several standards and simplify readings within his course. He also explains how using different design activites to make "complex reading" simple so the students can understand the readings before moving forward. He encourages his students participation, discussion, and group activities to have a full overall understanding of Dr. Martin Luther King's letter/writing.
Gregory Broussard Aug 18, 2023 3:50pm
1. Mr. Hanify integrates the different Common Core standards into this lesson by teaching the students a process in learning, developing their own ideas, and learning from others while questioning and questioning their ideas. Students pre-read the selected assignment. In doing this, they are familiar with the text. In class, they create thinking notes for questions or ideas they have and they have close reading exercises to create a pre and final draft of their ideas. Mr. Hanify uses multiple standards in this process. Students perform the reading standard, then speaking and listening in groups, and finally argumentative writing where groups present their findings to each other.
2. The turn and talk moments are continual resulting in continued exchange of information and improvement of ideas. Through the Socratic Seminar, the lesson requires the students to identify the writer's focus and purpose while questioning how these ideas are relevant today. Students create their own level of questions and create their own connections. Once they group to share, explain, and defend their ideas it allows the students to create their formal writing to be submitted through a blog. The scaffolding in completing the lesson and understanding the process in effecitve learning is represented in the students reviewing and providing feedback to at least 2 others.
Crystal Kelley Jul 31, 2023 9:25am
1. Mr. Hanify integrates reading, writing, and presentation standards through different activities. Students have multiple avenues to convey that they understand the material and meet the Common Core standards.
2. Mr. Hanify begins with group discussions to allow the students to bounce ideas back and forth. This leads to presenting information in a Powerpoint, and ends with each student creating a blog post for their argumentative writing assignment. You can see the trajectory of knowing who Dr. King is, reading his letter, discussing the central idea, and then applying that to current global conditions.
Bridgett V Jul 20, 2023 10:28am
1) He has the students practice the central idea in multiple ways to practice.
2) He created ways for them scaffold their learning by unpacking information and sharing them with each other. After they discuss together then they do a Socratic Circle which involve strong participation and listening.
DeAnna Granger Jul 19, 2023 1:01pm
1) Mr. Hanify intergrates mutiple standards into his lesson. He does this over time. First, he starts out with reading to identify the central idea. He then applies other standards into his lesson through many other activities the students do such as the Socratic Seminar and writing a blog entry.
2) The many different activities that Mr. Hanify offered helped the students to build upon their learning through sharing what they have learned and creating a blog and powerpoint.