No Series: Peer Review Using Warm & Cool Feedback

ELA.W.11-12.5

Common core State Standards

  • ELA:  English Language Arts
  • W:  Writing Standards 6-12
  • 11-12:  11th & 12th Grades
  • 5: 
    Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing,
    rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most
    significant for a specific purpose and audience. (Editing for conventions should
    demonstrate command of Language standards 1-\x80\x933 up to and including grades
    11-12 on page 54.)

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Peer Review Using Warm & Cool Feedback

Lesson Objective: Uncut Classrooms This 42 minute Uncut Classroom footage was used to create:
Grade 12 / ELA / Peer Review
42 MIN
ELA.W.11-12.5

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Discussion and Supporting Materials

Thought starters

  1. What You'll See: critical friends group, warm and cool feedback, analyze and evaluate peer writing, student discussion, google docs, collaborative revision?

3 Comments

  • Private message to Ryan Donahue

This fella could have walked through the directions step-by-step separate from his other commentary. Breakdown in the workflow right after he released them to begin group work. UDL principles: make it possible for ALL the students to succeed, not those closest to an imaginary average. The KISS rule is sorely in need of application here. 

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  • Private message to Chirag Rana

   I love how the teacher begins the class with an stretch to be able to ease their way into the lesson they'll be tackling. What also really stoodout about his teaching style is how he'll check in with each student to see how they are doing, and if they are falling behind then he'll allow them to catch up during the class. Especially, when the teacher is walking around the class and motivating certain students to gether their point across when a peer review evaluation is going on with their respective paper. Even when he gives the class a reflective outlook towards the end of the class about what the students have learned during the evaluation.

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  • Private message to Gail Femsom

This works well

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South Windsor High School
161 Nevers Road
South Windsor CT 06074
Population: 1266

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